Antar No Abalkho written by me.

Respected Sir,

Analysis of myself written Gujarati poem with the help of I.A.Richards`s figurative language:-

Title:­-Antar No Abalkho

Kali aa nisha ma tarla no chamkaro,

Jane gheraeli nirasha ma yaad no palkaro.

Khichokhich vant ma ekant no isharo,

Jane khalipa ni jaga ma koi no saharo.

Vagoline bharela harday na vicharo,

Jane antar na virah no kaymi sathvaro.

Bas…vidhata no amulay pitaro,

Jane nij ma samavi levano irado.

Here above mentioned poem throws light with some particular techniques of written expression of one’s own feelings or desires. In very short structure , it can presents a vital idea. Use of paradox, metaphors and visual image also well depicted in this poem and that’s why at the end of the poem gets clear image at all.

From starting to the end tries to express views or rather sentiments with the use of metaphors like very first two lines of the poem shows that in a dark night when star brightened on the entire sky like that when one is in disappointment someone’s reminding pops up his or her mind and remove the darkness of disappointment.

Next two lines have the tone of paradox as in these lines there is a way having crowd of people yet same here a sign of loneliness that intentionally tries to shows the support of someone in a lonely place.  Ultimately it’s an attempt to show one’s presence in even loneliness.

Second last two lines shows  internal  thoughts that one possesses in his or her heart that metaphorically gives company to one’s internal emotional sentiment through such support it’s aim to show the feeling of relief from self sadness that one has in heart.

Visual image of gods precious gift reffered in last two lines. As the word, “ Vidhta no amulya pitaro” mentioned here that intentionally ends with the poem’s real end.  Ultimate desire of getting or rather try to get that valuable treasure of god.

At the end of my analysis I would say that from beginning to the end there is a image of one or another problem but with having some enough relaxment or rather solution to get concern from one or another way that finally ends with one desire or intension of getting god precious treasure with all above relaxtation of different human emotions.